User blog comment:Dyrcaend/Primary storyline Act one/@comment-24081662-20140917200329

IC: Dyrx eventually stepped up into the hotel. It wasnt precisely a luxury suite, but it was nice enough, and xe didnt thynk xe would have trouble sleeping there. xe walked over to the reception.

Dyrx: any rooms available?

Clerk (or whatever, I dont know what that job is called.): Um... Are you... here for you pare-

Dyrx rolls xirs eyes rather convincingly.

Dyrx: ack, I am sick of people thinking im too young! im nineteen, sheesh...

Clerk: uh... huh. And why are you here then...?

Dyrx just growls and mutters 'none of your business'. The clerk stops for a moment, thinking.

Clerk: ok yes we have some spare rooms. Do you have enough money to pay for it?

Dyrx slaps a few silver piece on the table.

Dyrx: depends. wyl this suffice?

the clerk squirms for a moment, then replies.

Clerk: I dont thynk this is proper currency but...

Dyrx: it roughly equals seventy USD. That should be sufficient, I presume?

Clerk: Ok, yes, I suppose so. But if you want to stay here for more than two daes you will need...

Dyrx cuts him off: Two daes should be more than sufficient. What room number, and wheres the key?

The clerk hands Dyrx the key and room number, and dyrx walks upstairs to the third floor and enters the room, locking the door behind xir. Xe takes a quick survey of the room; a table, TV, bathroom, and bed. Before relaxing however, Dyrx heads out and grabs some meat and frutis at a store. Xe waanders back to the hotel, and enters xirs room.

Xe stores xirs clothes again, rotating the wheel clockwise as xe does. Xe leans back, and collapses onto the bed, staring at the cieling, then rolls over onto xirs side and falls asleep, even though it is only five o'clock.

OOC: only one more post then im done with this monologue!

... trying to decide if im melodramatic, or just a good story writer. What do you think? am I too mellodramatic or am I doing wyl? im trying to write it at sorta book-quality level, writing it more lyke a story than an RP. So what do you thynk?

Also, yeah I use alot of detael